Name of Assignment: Descriptive Essay 3
Teacher: Morgan Andaluz
Class: ENG 100
This assignment address the twenty first skill of Communication Skills. In this project, I wrote an essay to show/explain to the reader how the character feels emotionally and physically thought my descriptive essay. This relates to communication skills because I am apply my knowledge of how to present a world in someones head though my words on paper.
I am most proud of the capability I have learned throughout this class on how to write an essay of how to put your reader into the shoes of your main character. And instead of just blatantly saying how the feel emotionally and physically. So I am proud that this essays shows my growth from past essays.
I improved upon the twenty first century skill of communication skills by learning how to convey how my character is feeling, how to revise an essay, and how to respond and take criticism during peer reviews. I developed my communication skills by then applying what I have learned into my essay.
The most difficult part about this assignment was decided where I would be describing. It took me multiple days to figure out what I wanted to write about and what emotion I wanted to communicate throughout the essay.
If I had the possibility of redoing this assignment I would have asked my friends and peer to be harsher on the peer review, this is because I missed some things that could have been improved upon before submitting at my final draft.
This assignment relates to past projects on writing a descriptive essay, revising such essay and reviewing my work after peer reviews. This also relates to other assignments in reference to communicating emotions and describing the world just using memory.
After working on this project I gained some knowledge on how to write a descriptive essay, how to take criticism from peer reviews, how to convey the underlying emotions and how to then revise my essay. This way I will be able to apply what I have learned into other essays on this topic or just how to revise an essay.
Teacher: Morgan Andaluz
Class: ENG 100
This assignment address the twenty first skill of Communication Skills. In this project, I wrote an essay to show/explain to the reader how the character feels emotionally and physically thought my descriptive essay. This relates to communication skills because I am apply my knowledge of how to present a world in someones head though my words on paper.
I am most proud of the capability I have learned throughout this class on how to write an essay of how to put your reader into the shoes of your main character. And instead of just blatantly saying how the feel emotionally and physically. So I am proud that this essays shows my growth from past essays.
I improved upon the twenty first century skill of communication skills by learning how to convey how my character is feeling, how to revise an essay, and how to respond and take criticism during peer reviews. I developed my communication skills by then applying what I have learned into my essay.
The most difficult part about this assignment was decided where I would be describing. It took me multiple days to figure out what I wanted to write about and what emotion I wanted to communicate throughout the essay.
If I had the possibility of redoing this assignment I would have asked my friends and peer to be harsher on the peer review, this is because I missed some things that could have been improved upon before submitting at my final draft.
This assignment relates to past projects on writing a descriptive essay, revising such essay and reviewing my work after peer reviews. This also relates to other assignments in reference to communicating emotions and describing the world just using memory.
After working on this project I gained some knowledge on how to write a descriptive essay, how to take criticism from peer reviews, how to convey the underlying emotions and how to then revise my essay. This way I will be able to apply what I have learned into other essays on this topic or just how to revise an essay.